At what point did I decide
that I need to recount my life
in rhyme and elegant lines,
sophisticated metaphors, and
At what point
Did I decide my sentences were
Best broken up
Into fragments,
Did I think
It would alter
The message
I’m conveying
To you?
And,
At what point did I decide that I needed to
Forsake the period?
Exhaust the comma?
An endless barrage of rhetoric-al questions, and
Run-on sentences,
Running—
Running—
Running—
Gaining intensity as I raise my voice,
At what point
Did I decide setting up the
Fashion for me, toy maker, a very special doll
With eyes plucked from the cold abyss
And skin a brittle Fall.
Weave her hair from seaweed and the tresses of an ass,
Lips of rotten berries, and
Her nails of broken glass.
Give her breath, dear toy maker, and voice, a witch's groan;
And stitch into her supple breast
A heart of porous stone.
Paint on a Writer's Palette by Splenda-Kills, literature
Literature
Paint on a Writer's Palette
Word.
A vague and
Civil way
To express the
Feelings
We harbor inside.
Words can be
Tangled.
Emphasized.
Sweetened.
Misleading.
Misunderstood.
Lost.
They never
Do our feelings
Justice,
But they provide
A quick glance
Into
Our
Souls.
I corrupt people.
I spin my tales like a spider's web,
A writer's web leaves dizzying trails
On which I grab your pretty hair
(and rip some out, I'm sorry...not)
and drag you along my terrifying ride.
I corrupt people.
I stain this paper on which I write
With the pure impurity of my mind
and people love it, eat it, dream it,
for I stain these people too.
And my claws sadistically rip into you
And tear through your skin, your heart, your soul
Until I find proof that you love it too.
I corrupt people.
I am the one with voice sincere
While drabbl'ing words you like to hear
And you eat it all up.
I write, and I corrupt.
At what point did I decide
that I need to recount my life
in rhyme and elegant lines,
sophisticated metaphors, and
At what point
Did I decide my sentences were
Best broken up
Into fragments,
Did I think
It would alter
The message
I’m conveying
To you?
And,
At what point did I decide that I needed to
Forsake the period?
Exhaust the comma?
An endless barrage of rhetoric-al questions, and
Run-on sentences,
Running—
Running—
Running—
Gaining intensity as I raise my voice,
At what point
Did I decide setting up the
Fashion for me, toy maker, a very special doll
With eyes plucked from the cold abyss
And skin a brittle Fall.
Weave her hair from seaweed and the tresses of an ass,
Lips of rotten berries, and
Her nails of broken glass.
Give her breath, dear toy maker, and voice, a witch's groan;
And stitch into her supple breast
A heart of porous stone.
Paint on a Writer's Palette by Splenda-Kills, literature
Literature
Paint on a Writer's Palette
Word.
A vague and
Civil way
To express the
Feelings
We harbor inside.
Words can be
Tangled.
Emphasized.
Sweetened.
Misleading.
Misunderstood.
Lost.
They never
Do our feelings
Justice,
But they provide
A quick glance
Into
Our
Souls.
At what point did I decide
that I need to recount my life
in rhyme and elegant lines,
sophisticated metaphors, and
At what point
Did I decide my sentences were
Best broken up
Into fragments,
Did I think
It would alter
The message
I’m conveying
To you?
And,
At what point did I decide that I needed to
Forsake the period?
Exhaust the comma?
An endless barrage of rhetoric-al questions, and
Run-on sentences,
Running—
Running—
Running—
Gaining intensity as I raise my voice,
At what point
Did I decide setting up the
Just before the end of spring, I've decided to remove all the crap from my dA. I've grown, I guess, hopefully...!
Well, I've grown enough to be thoroughly disgusted with about 80% of my old stuff. I'm not totally finished spiffying up but I'll get there.
Hi urrbody!